Here's my final (poorly) lit entry:
And for those interested, here's a progression video:
Overall I'm not pleased. I don't think that there are many hitches in the movements or anything looking too weird, but this piece made me realize I need to spend way more time planning. The acting is atrocious! It's so boring and bland and not nearly pushed enough.
I'm pretty sure I'll be entering this months contest though, and if I do I'm going to definitely try and push the performance.
Also, wound up in 52nd place.
So now my standings are:
112/160 ~ 3.31 stars
83/188 ~ 4.97 stars
52/191 ~ 5.26 stars
So at least I'm improving!